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"Lost Words"
"Lost Words" This is the first poem I've ever written and my first blog entry so please be gentle.I welcome all comments so please let me know what you think "Lost Words" Your words Fill the empty spaces In my mind They chime And resonate Like the sound Of the sweetest bell A violin string Vibrating To create A music masterpiece And my heart sings Hallelujah.. But soon Those words Are lost To me Forgotten By you Shared With someone else And like Autumn's Brightly colored leaves Flutter away In a cold wind Leaving only The barren soil And the empty spaces Return -Sasha- |
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1 message 6/11/2015 19h36 |
Hi Sasha! I've always been a fan of the more traditional poetry.... like the kind one could make into a song, ... rhyme, miter, liter, and all of that happy stuff! But this first poem really does paint a vivid picture, and is very poignant, with a strong hint of loneliness! It makes one desire to call you, or see you in person, just to say the nice things that you were used to hearing. Hope I didn't overdo it here, but I'm a poet and musician, so what do you expect!
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1 message 23/9/2013 12h55 |
This touching poem makes aware of the void... In all my searching, the only thing I've found that makes the emptiness bearable is each other I'd be honored to help you fill that empty space
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1 message 23/9/2013 6h39 |
i enjoyed your blog-if intrested in becoming friends please email
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Hi Sasha, you've been a little quiet ... any interest?
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Hi Sasha, I would love to chat but I'm only a regular member so you can either leave a comment on my blog
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Sasha... welcome to the blogs! Love your poem! I'm so familiar with the empty spaces... sigh. --Author Unknown
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I hope this was not taken from a real life experience. Sounds like someone was hurt pretty badly.
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Very nice. Congratulations, and welcome to Blogland. Check out my profile or and become a "watcher" of my blog FMAOPLS,to learn more about me, and for intelligent, lively, smartassy and fun discussion, with a little irreverence thrown in. "Like" or comment on my photos, and I promise I'll add more. Thanks.
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