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"Lost Words"  

sasha3676 66F  
71 messages
17/4/2013 10h46

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"Lost Words"

This is the first poem I've ever written and my first blog entry so please be gentle.I welcome all comments so please let me know what you think

"Lost Words"

Your words
Fill the empty spaces
In my mind
They chime
And resonate
Like the sound
Of the sweetest bell
A violin string
Vibrating
To create
A music masterpiece
And my heart sings
Hallelujah..

But soon
Those words
Are lost
To me
Forgotten
By you
Shared
With someone else
And like Autumn's
Brightly colored leaves
Flutter away
In a cold wind
Leaving only
The barren soil
And the empty spaces
Return
-Sasha-


tennissx 66H
1 message
6/11/2015 19h36

Hi Sasha! I've always been a fan of the more traditional poetry.... like the kind one could make into a song, ... rhyme, miter, liter, and all of that happy stuff! But this first poem really does paint a vivid picture, and is very poignant, with a strong hint of loneliness! It makes one desire to call you, or see you in person, just to say the nice things that you were used to hearing. Hope I didn't overdo it here, but I'm a poet and musician, so what do you expect!


sledgehamer54 65H
1 message
23/9/2013 12h55

This touching poem makes aware of the void...

In all my searching, the only thing I've found that makes the emptiness bearable is each other

I'd be honored to help you fill that empty space


sailorman141 73H
1 message
23/9/2013 6h39

i enjoyed your blog-if intrested in becoming friends please email


hornynow4u96 59H
98 messages
7/8/2013 5h56

Hi Sasha, you've been a little quiet ... any interest?


hornynow4u96 59H
98 messages
18/7/2013 10h13

Hi Sasha, I would love to chat but I'm only a regular member so you can either leave a comment on my blog


Violette001 51F
4619 messages
2/5/2013 17h18

Sasha... welcome to the blogs! Love your poem! I'm so familiar with the empty spaces... sigh.

"Do not put the key to your happiness in someone else's pocket"
--Author Unknown



rm_bigsteve6200 61H
1349 messages
17/4/2013 18h04

I hope this was not taken from a real life experience. Sounds like someone was hurt pretty badly.


FMAOPLS 70F
27112 messages
17/4/2013 17h45

Very nice.

Congratulations, and welcome to Blogland.

Check out my profile or and become a "watcher" of my blog FMAOPLS,to learn more about me, and for intelligent, lively, smartassy and fun discussion, with a little irreverence thrown in. "Like" or comment on my photos, and I promise I'll add more. Thanks.


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