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River rushing below bluffs  

senfully 55F  
618 messages
19/7/2021 6h40
River rushing below bluffs


River rushing below bluffs
written July 7th, 2021

I dream of the bluffs
we visited that day
river rushing below
demarcating freedom

these years of practicing
flying away across fields
in preparation for this night
have made my wings strong

can I reach the bluffs?
float out over the river below?
escape these fields and rows
encompassing my life

I fly towards my future
until wings collapse trembling
on the edge of becoming
or breaking into pieces
I fall to the ground

Not to the bluffs
and river rushing below
not this time
but one night soon
with these wings made strong.

senfully 55F  
443 messages
19/7/2021 6h40

Growing up amidst the cornfields of rural Illinois, and the bluffs along the Mississippi River. That line about "wings made strong" was in another poem, but the poem didn't achieve what I wanted. Maybe this one comes closer.


heartshapedcock2 40H

19/7/2021 8h01

I used to live right up the river from you in rural Wisconsin about 30 miles from the Cities. Beautiful country.


senfully replies on 26/7/2021 6h12:
It is. I remember visiting though it was decades ago. Galena and areas south of there. I'm glad the poem brought back good memories.

boobwhisperer69 61H  
8322 messages
19/7/2021 9h40

I like that!!!!!


senfully replies on 26/7/2021 6h12:
Thank you for reading me and commenting!

kamaruhl3 63H
4985 messages
19/7/2021 15h23

very descriptive. almost feel like i'm with you


senfully replies on 26/7/2021 6h13:
That is quite a compliment! Always glad to see you here. hugs!

Ultraviolet_Sol 43H
622 messages
24/7/2021 11h44

This is so beautiful Sen.

*. *. *


senfully replies on 26/7/2021 6h13:
Thank you! Glad to see you and here and also your poems. Hugs!

69ereatwetpussy 61H
6774 messages
26/7/2021 6h01

Have no fear
I'm am here
Land in my arms
You will not be harmed
Hold onto me
Till you wings set you free
Come back to me
Out by the sea
Fly away
Come back so day
The water still flows
And our love grows
One never know
What can be found
When you land on my ground
Xoxoxoxo thank you for my Birthday Poam


senfully replies on 26/7/2021 6h14:
What an incredible response. Your response makes my life richer. Thank you! Hugs so much!

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